Cold

This place im in so cold.
Nothing you could behold.

This place im in to see.
There's nothing left for me.

This place like a dark hole.
There is no more control.

This place like a frozen cave.
Nothing will ever behave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Tacito Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 6:11 AM
I can relate to this. Nice job.
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 9:42 AM
These paired lines are considered rhyming couplets. They have decent descriptiveness and rhyming.
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