Cold

On that cold night
my heart did sink,
I was the only one standing weak.
my heart went flip-flop, flip-flop
while he spoke,
that was the end of you and me.
He said, "I wasn't good enough."
I asked, "why?"
He said, "'cause you're a liar,"
my heart died.
3 years of my life 
I dedicated to him.
On our wedding day 
he did this sin.

copyright by Shanaye Hurtt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hurtt Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 9:27 AM
I'm glad everyone can feel the emotion that I was trying to portray behind this poem, but this hasn't really happened before.
Palli Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 11:45 AM
how devastating
A   Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 6:58 AM
blow me away, a typical person to do such a thing. It is sad and coldblooded, enjoyed,..p.d.
A  Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 6:55 AM
WOW, STRONG WRITE, FOR HIM TO DO THAT IS JUST WRONG
Mehta Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 6:54 AM
A very expressive on lost love
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