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Cold

winter's cold enfolds
heat pump comes on with warmth
relief but cha-ching
quiet penetrates.
this empty room owns sadness,
no talk ,or orders.
adjustments, part of life now

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Andrea Dietrich

December 28, 2025 at 11:25 AM

Sad and I know it goes along with how you must be filling. It's a good poem

Sara Kendrick

December 28, 2025 at 4:32 PM

Yes, it goes along with how I am feeling from time to time, Andrea. Thanks for the visit and understanding review. Sara K

sara Etgen-Baker

December 24, 2025 at 4:55 PM

your poem resonated with me, Sara K, and lent credence to the phrase 'new normal.' Wishing you the best as the new year approaches, hugs & blessings, Sara

Sara Kendrick

December 25, 2025 at 4:10 AM

Thank you, Sara B. I need to get out if I possibly can, but it was next to impossible before Tommy's death and even harder now. I hope this is a wonderful Christmas Morn for you and Bill and both of your families. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

December 24, 2025 at 5:11 AM

A great change. Hugs from me to you. My Dad knows that cold feeling of home and heart.

Sara Kendrick

December 24, 2025 at 8:25 AM

Thank you, Kim. It seems like you wrote about or told that your mom had died. I don't remember how long ago but it seems like it was very recent. I am sure that he is still feeling the loss. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K

Howard Kerr

December 23, 2025 at 6:45 PM

I’m pleased,. Sarah. that I reminded you of the Choka form and its potential for the writer. Your work has a dark beauty in its reflections on winter and its intense challenges for each person. I value your review of my writings, Howard

Howard Kerr

December 23, 2025 at 6:44 PM

Sara Kendrick

December 24, 2025 at 8:23 AM

Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Ken Martin

December 23, 2025 at 5:19 PM

How veritable.

Sara Kendrick

December 24, 2025 at 6:04 AM

Thank you, Ken. I appreciate the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

December 23, 2025 at 11:40 AM

Dear Sara, Your poem captures the starkness of winter with such honesty. It was a genuine joy to read, even in its somber tone, because of the clarity and truth you bring to the moment. Merry Christmas and Holiday Blessings, Dear Sara, Daniel

Sara Kendrick

December 23, 2025 at 12:05 PM

Why, thank you, Daniel, for the seasons' greetings. I appreciate your visit and uplifting review. Sara K