Coin of Family

coin of family

 From the thought to stand with
 new dreams,i took a step to reach
 the peak of my dream 

 But fall always with the reason of
 arrogant nature with fake promises 
 to understand my dreams by the
 stupid coin of family 
 
 pattern of society but knowledge
 & status of poor bring me down
 
 Father bring to force me live 
 like his own path which is called
 by the sense of coin of family 

 Mother bring the pain of poverty 
 is the other side of coin of family 

 My days are crying for the day 
 when they understand the feather
 of my nest 

 coin of family





 With love all
 Jagdish bajantri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 26, 2017 at 3:55 AM
This is such a beautiful poem, absolutely wonderful, your choice of words, and images is exquisite. Yet the message you bring is filled with sadness. How hard it is, being in a family, and at the same time fighting to live your own life.
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