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Coffee In Abstract

Mornings light beams, in fragments gleam on the surface of the dark liquid inside my mug. This is where the sun lives, it blooms within a coffee bean. When it touches my tongue, it engulfs my soul with its golden beam. Slowly I become free from my dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/22/2015 11:30:00 PM
Amanda, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/21/2015 6:09:00 PM
I'm more of a tea person but can relate to this write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Amanda Shelton
Date: 7/21/2015 8:35:00 PM
I have to thank you for helping me. I love tea too it is one of my main food staples in my home it makes my tummy feel better when I am not well. Coffee is really good for migraines at least my. :-)
Date: 7/21/2015 5:08:00 PM
Amanda, a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Amanda Shelton
Date: 7/21/2015 8:43:00 PM
:-) Thank you for a warm welcome, I am glad to have found you guys like I did. I would love to be poetrysoup friends Hehe!* I sometimes go by Shady Rose or Shady Rose Bud though my real name is Amanda.
Date: 7/21/2015 4:34:00 PM
Very good. A nice cup of coffee starts the day off just right.
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Amanda Shelton
Date: 7/21/2015 8:43:00 PM
Thanks I like coffee too it helps with migraines and other things too. :-)

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