Tamal Kundu Poet Cinquain

Coffee Date

Morning.
Brewing coffee
Brings you out in my shirt
To serve us both heavy spoons of 
Jam and 
Perch on the counter top. Pancakes
On mute sizzle, I taste 
The last batch on
Your lips.



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Form: Butterfly Cinquain
Lines: 9
Date: 01 /11 / 2016

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Doug Vinson December 21, 2016 at 2:40 PM Ha! Butterfly Cinquain - I was going to say it looks like a 'butterfly bandage' covering over sensory deprivation.

Alexis Y. December 11, 2016 at 10:16 PM Hi Tamal, At first glance this form looked a pair of lips. This is a good write. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis Tamal Kundu December 12, 2016 at 5:52 AM Thank you, Alexis. :)

Deborah Burch December 11, 2016 at 7:49 PM Tamal!! You make coffee sexy. Oh my!! Lol! Love this form you've used as well. You are a clever lad. Well done. Hugggs. Deb. Tamal Kundu December 12, 2016 at 5:51 AM But Coffee IS sexy. Right after whiskey, and may be dark chocolate! :D Thanks for reading, Deborah.

Kim Rodrigues December 11, 2016 at 4:50 PM A pretty picture! Thanks for entering my contest! Congrats, Tamal! Tamal Kundu December 12, 2016 at 5:48 AM Thank you, Kim, and thank you for the contest!

Darren White November 25, 2016 at 1:53 AM Oh my Tamal, I've written a few coffee poems myself :) You make me hungry and wanting more coffee. And the form of that cinquain... So good. Tamal Kundu November 25, 2016 at 11:28 AM Cheers!

Constance La France November 15, 2016 at 9:50 AM Tamal this so beautifully penned, CONGRATULATIONS. Tamal Kundu November 15, 2016 at 10:00 AM Thank you!

Sandra Haight November 15, 2016 at 9:26 AM A beautiful morning, Tamai! Lovely poem, and congrats on your fine podium win! Sandra Tamal Kundu November 15, 2016 at 9:30 AM Thank you Sandra, and thank you for reading! :)

Kim Rodrigues November 14, 2016 at 9:52 PM Sizzling! Congrats, Tamal! Tamal Kundu November 14, 2016 at 10:50 PM Thank you, Kim!