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Coffee Date

Morning. Brewing coffee Brings you out in my shirt To serve us both heavy spoons of Jam and Perch on the counter top. Pancakes On mute sizzle, I taste The last batch on Your lips.
---------------------------------------- Form: Butterfly Cinquain Lines: 9 Date: 01 /11 / 2016

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Date: 12/21/2016 2:40:00 PM
Ha! Butterfly Cinquain - I was going to say it looks like a 'butterfly bandage' covering over sensory deprivation.
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Date: 12/11/2016 10:16:00 PM
Hi Tamal, At first glance this form looked a pair of lips. This is a good write. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/12/2016 5:52:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis. :)
Date: 12/11/2016 7:49:00 PM
Tamal!! You make coffee sexy. Oh my!! Lol! Love this form you've used as well. You are a clever lad. Well done. Hugggs. Deb.
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/12/2016 5:51:00 AM
But Coffee IS sexy. Right after whiskey, and may be dark chocolate! :D Thanks for reading, Deborah.
Date: 12/11/2016 4:50:00 PM
A pretty picture! Thanks for entering my contest! Congrats, Tamal!
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/12/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you, Kim, and thank you for the contest!
Date: 11/25/2016 1:53:00 AM
Oh my Tamal, I've written a few coffee poems myself :) You make me hungry and wanting more coffee. And the form of that cinquain... So good.
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/25/2016 11:28:00 AM
Cheers!
Date: 11/15/2016 9:50:00 AM
Tamal this so beautifully penned, CONGRATULATIONS.
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/15/2016 10:00:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/15/2016 9:26:00 AM
A beautiful morning, Tamai! Lovely poem, and congrats on your fine podium win! Sandra
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/15/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Sandra, and thank you for reading! :)
Date: 11/14/2016 9:52:00 PM
Sizzling! Congrats, Tamal!
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/14/2016 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!

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