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Coffee Break

Lively at eight, the pool’s a.m.
Morning coffee’s brewing; I’m bending.
Noodled ‘til class end, then I sip.
Ostentatious sciatica
Propels me into later wake.

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2025

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Oliver Mckeithan Date: 6/12/2025 4:48:00 AM Wonderful poem for the prompt Kim. Need that caffeine before hydrotherapy Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/12/2025 5:04:00 AM But…sometimes after, if I’m not up early enough!

Valsa George Date: 6/11/2025 9:31:00 PM Beautiful Abecedarian. Sorry to know that you suffer from sciatica. Somehow happy to know that a cup of coffee will revive you. All the Best, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/12/2025 5:05:00 AM Since epidural, doing better…not perfect, but better.

Paige Hind Date: 6/11/2025 5:39:00 PM It seems this poem has the idea or wish for healing coffee time, and I wish all that sciatica would leave to you can bend better. Enjoyed your thoughts, it's evening, hope your muse gave you some comfort this morning, because I don't know what I would do without mine, lol- <3 Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/12/2025 5:06:00 AM LOL…we need a-muse :)

Jan Allison Date: 6/11/2025 2:24:00 PM enjoy your cup of Joe Kim thought I much prefer tea myself, have never heard of pool noodles i must look it up:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/11/2025 2:41:00 PM Thank you, Jan!

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/11/2025 12:08:00 PM Hello Kim, We both need that coffee to wake up. Other wise we would be sleepy all day. Hugs. /Darlene/ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/12/2025 12:26:00 PM Hello Kim, yes a cup full is enjoyable. Hugs. Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/11/2025 12:47:00 PM Hello kim, i also enjoy a cupful. i drain my coffee pot. I have it mostly through the day. Hugs. /Darlene/ Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/11/2025 12:41:00 PM Definately enjoy a cupful! Cheers!