Aiyah Torres Poet Blank verse

Coffee and You

one lovely morning

                    warm smile,fresh air

                           light talks,

                         day dreaming.

                         A toast of love,

                        a scent of aroma

                 soothing in my membrane
                     
                      creamy and sweet,
 
                  a perfect moment indeed.

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Doug Vinson December 11, 2016 at 4:00 PM : ) " a perfect moment indeed." Aiyah, so true!

Richard Lamoureux December 18, 2013 at 11:43 AM did you mean "A trace of love"? not sure what tose is. Other than that this is a lovely piece, I like the mood you have created. Aiyah Torres December 19, 2013 at 10:00 AM oh thank you,Richard!!,,you're such a blessing from up above.. :)).. thanks for the help.. Richard Lamoureux December 18, 2013 at 12:14 PM Yes I understand, the word you are looking for is toast as in "I toast you with a glass of wine."

Poet Tacito December 5, 2013 at 9:47 AM Though I am not a coffee guy, I am a hot chocolate guy. SO, I can relate to this feeling...big time. :) Nicely done! Aiyah Torres December 5, 2013 at 11:06 AM nice one hot choco guy! :) ..

Anne-Lise Andresen December 4, 2013 at 12:35 PM - I take my black (no sugar or cream) - Well done, Aiyah. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Aiyah Torres December 4, 2013 at 12:40 PM Thank you,Lise :)... I like black when its brewed,,,plain and bitter :)