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Coffee and You

one lovely morning warm smile,fresh air light talks, day dreaming. A toast of love, a scent of aroma soothing in my membrane creamy and sweet, a perfect moment indeed.

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Doug Vinson

Date: 12/11/2016 4:00:00 PM

: ) " a perfect moment indeed." Aiyah, so true!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/18/2013 11:43:00 AM

did you mean "A trace of love"? not sure what tose is. Other than that this is a lovely piece, I like the mood you have created.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/19/2013 10:00:00 AM

oh thank you,Richard!!,,you're such a blessing from up above.. :)).. thanks for the help..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/18/2013 12:14:00 PM

Yes I understand, the word you are looking for is toast as in "I toast you with a glass of wine."

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/5/2013 9:47:00 AM

Though I am not a coffee guy, I am a hot chocolate guy. SO, I can relate to this feeling...big time. :) Nicely done!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/5/2013 11:06:00 AM

nice one hot choco guy! :) ..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/4/2013 12:35:00 PM

- I take my black (no sugar or cream) - Well done, Aiyah. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/4/2013 12:40:00 PM

Thank you,Lise :)... I like black when its brewed,,,plain and bitter :)