Coffee

Coffee... with extra cream steamy hot Appeal... extra sweet this cant be real Whipped... thick yet lean intoxicating scene ohh... that coffee smile curves my lips anxiously awaiting my first sip Lay

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John Loving Iii

Date: 4/6/2012 1:30:00 PM

very good talking about something i love but cant have any more.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/28/2012 1:09:00 PM

Good morning Lay! that's what the coffee says! My buddy too. cool poem and tribute to a much needed drug of choice!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2012 8:44:00 PM

What a great poem for coffee lovers. you make us really taste it!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/23/2012 11:26:00 PM

A great write, Lay. I'm not a coffee drinker, but I love a Starbuck's chai latte. It's my favorite drink, so steamy, foamy, sweet and delicious. Yummy! Now I want one, but it's 1:20 a.m. here. lol. Blessings, Rhonda

Susan Simpkins

Date: 3/23/2012 8:48:00 PM

love coffee, mmmmmmm,lol,nice one

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/23/2012 12:34:00 PM

Makes me want to run to Starbucks for a cup. Too bad I'm not a coffee drinker. I enjoyed reading your poem. Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 11:30:00 AM

I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Lay. Love, Carol