Coffee

Slowly the drop drips… Deep, tasty, and bitter sweet The coffee of life.

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 7/9/2010 4:27:00 AM

Well brewed- I could smell the aroma of a real coffee through your Haiku. GBU. Ernilando

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/6/2010 7:26:00 AM

great poem, congrats on the feature this week enjoyed reading today!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 3:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Celine. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

Date: 7/5/2010 2:31:00 PM

Interesting perspective for the reader to ponder about. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/5/2010 11:17:00 AM

dearest Celine, great description of coffee, it is long I tasted it, guess you love coffee. Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. great you! Love, Adeleke

Janette Fisher

Date: 7/5/2010 7:38:00 AM

Many congrats on your wonderful haiku being featured this week. Can smell the coffee all the way from the uk. Rgds Janette

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/3/2010 12:23:00 PM

This is just awesome regarding the coffee of life. I like the flow of the words and the essence of the message. One must drink form the cup to experience the process of life. Great job! Joseph