Coffee

Fresh ground eye popper;
The miracle medicine,
Elixir of life.
Barrier between the worlds
Of vibrancy and stagnation…
A cup of eye popp’in joe.

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Silent One

August 26, 2018 at 10:55 AM

Great tanka... we would be lost without a cup of Jo...

M. L. Kiser

August 26, 2018 at 2:08 PM

I actually went a whole year without it, once...was so happy to have it back! Thanks for stopping to read and comment.

Matthew Anish

August 25, 2018 at 4:27 PM

Nice job! I drink green tea instead of coffee due to stomach trouble. Yet I think this is fine work, nonetheless. Have you ever heard Bach's Coffee Cantana? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser

August 26, 2018 at 2:09 PM

I have my green tea for lunch and supper but, that coffee is major stuff for breakfast. I will have to look up that Bach's piece. Thanks for letting me know about it and for stopping by to read and comment.