Coffee

Fresh ground eye popper; The miracle medicine, Elixir of life. Barrier between the worlds Of vibrancy and stagnation… A cup of eye popp’in joe.

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Silent One

Date: 8/26/2018 10:55:00 AM

Great tanka... we would be lost without a cup of Jo...

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/26/2018 2:08:00 PM

I actually went a whole year without it, once...was so happy to have it back! Thanks for stopping to read and comment.

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/25/2018 4:27:00 PM

Nice job! I drink green tea instead of coffee due to stomach trouble. Yet I think this is fine work, nonetheless. Have you ever heard Bach's Coffee Cantana? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/26/2018 2:09:00 PM

I have my green tea for lunch and supper but, that coffee is major stuff for breakfast. I will have to look up that Bach's piece. Thanks for letting me know about it and for stopping by to read and comment.

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/24/2018 2:53:00 PM

I love it. A worthy tribute, ML.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/26/2018 2:09:00 PM

Many thanks, Line for stopping by. Glad to have your comments.