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Code Breakers

Possibilities Searching for the equations of how life began

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/8/2017 11:34:00 AM

I like this one, Laura, and your note makes it easier for one to understand. Of course this could also have been a Senryu, or if in doubt it could go under Tristich. ~ Pleased to see you posting again :) Warm regards // paul

Laura Hay
Date: 2/8/2017 1:00:00 PM

Thanks for your sound advice as always Paul, I'll look into those other 2 forms. It's been a while, warm regards, Laura

Jan Allison

Date: 2/7/2017 12:09:00 PM

Beautifully penned Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Hay
Date: 2/8/2017 9:11:00 AM

thanks Jan, always appreciate you stopping by, warm regards, Laura.

Chris Green

Date: 2/7/2017 10:58:00 AM

Nicely done Laura and I read it as a Haiku, your explanation makes perfect sense.

Laura Hay
Date: 2/8/2017 9:10:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind comments Chris, warm regards, Laura.