Coconuts

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Oct. 14, 2023       9.47am

Coconut trees are the trees of life
Providing needs at time of joys and strife.

Delicious drinks and foods from their big fruits
Soothing our tummy with loud hunger hoots.

Everyone can survive longer by coconuts alone
Providing shelter for protection and a lovely home.

Home with utensils, furniture and decorations
From all coco parts— capturing visitors’ attention.

Cleaning and working tools from leaves, trunk and shell
Toys for children to enjoy their childhood life so well. 

Coco oil and juices have healing and beauty wonder
Coconuts are life-saver from God, our greatest provider.

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Date: 10/15/2023 9:40:00 AM
Your "Coconuts" is a wonderful write. They are very healing. I love to eat/drink them. I have none where I live. Have a great/fun~day/week writing away..................
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2023 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Paula. I love to eat and drink coconuts too. Actually I'm using its oil to cure my skin allergies (from dust) now and yesterday, I drank its juice for my symptoms of UTI. Thank you so much again. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 10/13/2023 8:23:00 PM
So true, whenever i feel like the heat is too much i love having coconut. So yummy! And coconut trees are so beautiful, adds beauty to the islands! Love this poem, you’ve written very well on what coconut is used for etc too! So good
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2023 9:56:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting/encouraging comment my dear poet friend Ink. I wrote this poem with the inspiration of the place where I used to live. I lived in a place where coconuts are ground around us. Thank you so much. God bless you always and your writings. I'll visit you soon and the rest here. Hugs
Date: 10/13/2023 8:19:00 PM
You explain all the benefits of coconuts! Well done!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/18/2023 5:35:00 PM
Wow if there were coconut trees it must have been a beautiful tropical place you lived in. Cool.
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2023 9:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Karen. I wrote my poem through experience. I used to live in a place with so many coconut trees. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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