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Coconut

I looked through the window sill Came to my mind a windmill Tall and lean with many arms Unlike those windmills at farms. Up in the air, they dances Close to sea anemones Despite their bunches of loads Shakes with the tip of its toes. They love the sea’s mercy The one is in no worry To adapt in my red place And persuade me with its grace. Almost long a year to greet The hard shell one-seeded fruit Which hides the virgin water And make my tongue feel better.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/2/2021 8:46:00 AM
Great pen Watisungla, with lovely rhyme and flow. I love eating anything with coconut, it's my favourite taste. Hope you'll start writing again as you've got talent. Blessings, Gordon
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/30/2021 4:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Mr McConell.
Date: 9/23/2018 6:28:00 AM
Are you writing poems anymore?
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 9/23/2018 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Mr James Horn for waking me up from the deep slumber.
Date: 6/28/2016 2:22:00 PM
- Sounds delicious :) - A lovely poem, Watisungla - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/29/2016 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise for your valuable comment. Best wishes,Watisungla

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