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...Cocoa Brown Acorns

cocoa brown acorns
wait patiently chortling...
whoops man down

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David Smalling

November 11, 2010 at 10:47 AM

Figuring to figure what figure is figured here in this delicious scoop of music.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

November 7, 2010 at 8:19 PM

smiles as I read this-- love how those acorns "chortle" ;) & eep! haha bad breath?? never even crossed my mind but okidoki, I did get what you mean--actually that was why I included that lengthy description, not sure whether people would "get" it? I tried changing it...fingers crossed...& hmm I like seeing your name there? ;) kikko :)

L'Nass Shango

November 5, 2010 at 5:53 AM

Hey, Deb, powerful opening, and promising second, the ending is profound and left me out to wait ... more glory to the ending rendition. Keep flavored and flowing like a gem of love. Peace, my friend

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 3, 2010 at 10:09 AM

Thank you for posting your poetry that we may all enjoy it here at PoetrySoup Deborah. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

November 3, 2010 at 7:42 AM

....hmmmm; yep...I'd be down ! Great Senryu Deborah ! much love, james

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

November 3, 2010 at 7:18 AM

suggestive, brief, and rich in symbolism

Sara Kendrick

November 2, 2010 at 2:29 PM

Interesting Senryu...Those acorns fall heavy...I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 2, 2010 at 10:00 AM

Funny and full of humor, Debbie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 2, 2010 at 9:14 AM

haha..very cool TEACH as only u can write and describe with such humor... great Senryu on All Souls Day and wonderful blog today this pupil in luv enjoyed ...