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Cobwebs

cob webs gather in the quiet corner congregating mind dust adhering to the vacant synapses vibrating in the heat of random thought. 3/14/2017 submitted to Tweetable - Poetry contest

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Date: 4/17/2017 9:16:00 AM
Sorry mate, but the reason that you haven't featured in my finalists is a mere 6 characters. I copied this piece onto a "compose tweet" window and you exceeded by about one word. Thanks for alerting me to this piece as I did want to talk with the poet who entered it. So take away six characters and I'd like to promote this one through my twitter page all I can. I suggest erasing "conjugating". Feel free to PS mail me with your thoughts.
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Date: 3/19/2017 11:20:00 AM
Good luck John, love the thought behind yours. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 3/15/2017 11:30:00 PM
Perfect! 7+
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Date: 3/15/2017 3:40:00 PM
wow,if this one does not place. I will be shocked!
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Date: 3/15/2017 3:37:00 PM
That's just beautiful. So much in those four little lines.
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Date: 3/15/2017 12:31:00 PM
Love this John, good luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/14/2017 4:51:00 PM
I like this, John! Concise yet full of meaning. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim
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John Lawless
Date: 3/15/2017 12:01:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I don't tweet so this was a unique challenge to a computer/smartphone dinosaur.
Date: 3/14/2017 4:24:00 PM
Like! 7 and I might assume you too love Joan Osborne's song Spider Web... ;) xomo!
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John Lawless
Date: 3/15/2017 12:00:00 PM
Thanks for the high mark ..... and i don't think I've ever heard that song...

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