Cobweb

a cobweb in hearth...
clearing of dusty corners
...the arachnid flames

8/20/2018

firehaiku

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Demetrios Trifiatis

August 21, 2018 at 9:30 AM

Admirable Haiku dear, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues

August 21, 2018 at 4:25 PM

Thank you, Demetrios!

Caren Krutsinger

August 21, 2018 at 3:03 AM

I had a huge spider web for a long time because it was so beautiful, and I realized it must have taken all night or maybe two. I would not let anyone open the side garage door for months. Nice haiku.

Kim Rodrigues

August 21, 2018 at 6:50 AM

My neighbor, an extreme nature lover, has huge webs in front of her front door. Pretty, yes! But when you want to visit her...yikes! Thanks, Caren! Oh, and I love the spider web I saw over the koi pond!

Lyric Man

August 20, 2018 at 10:21 PM

The spider is a fierce warrior. Destroy his fort and while you sleep he will build it up again! Love your works, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues

August 21, 2018 at 2:40 AM

How true I know this is! Constant battle at my front door!

Sand Blown

August 20, 2018 at 4:16 PM

so inspiring if you're sitting before the fire imagining in the dark..."i've seen...things...you people wouldn't believe...but...that was a different planet time and space"

Kim Rodrigues

August 21, 2018 at 2:39 AM

We had to start a Summer fire because we had a tree fall on our deck causing cracks along top of fireplace. So we were checking it out. Interesting having on the air conditioning and the fireplace :)