Cobweb

a cobweb in hearth... clearing of dusty corners ...the arachnid flames 8/20/2018

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/21/2018 9:30:00 AM

Admirable Haiku dear, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2018 4:25:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/21/2018 3:03:00 AM

I had a huge spider web for a long time because it was so beautiful, and I realized it must have taken all night or maybe two. I would not let anyone open the side garage door for months. Nice haiku.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2018 6:50:00 AM

My neighbor, an extreme nature lover, has huge webs in front of her front door. Pretty, yes! But when you want to visit her...yikes! Thanks, Caren! Oh, and I love the spider web I saw over the koi pond!

Lyric Man

Date: 8/20/2018 10:21:00 PM

The spider is a fierce warrior. Destroy his fort and while you sleep he will build it up again! Love your works, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2018 2:40:00 AM

How true I know this is! Constant battle at my front door!

Sand Blown

Date: 8/20/2018 4:16:00 PM

so inspiring if you're sitting before the fire imagining in the dark..."i've seen...things...you people wouldn't believe...but...that was a different planet time and space"

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2018 2:39:00 AM

We had to start a Summer fire because we had a tree fall on our deck causing cracks along top of fireplace. So we were checking it out. Interesting having on the air conditioning and the fireplace :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/20/2018 4:00:00 PM

Well, if you don't like bugs, you should appreciate spiders - "the enemy of my enemy," and all that-

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2018 2:36:00 AM

LOL! True to a point :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2018 3:32:00 PM

I don't like spiders- very descriptive Kim!:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2018 3:57:00 PM

I don’t luck any bugs!