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For Nette Onclaud's Create A Crystalline - Lines Must Rhyme Poetry Contest

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Cobblestone

strong and loud, of cobblestone made - I won’t become some cheap concrete grade
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mysore Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 7:04 AM
class apart. cool write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Wolf Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 8:04 PM
Proud, bold, defiant --- even from its location in museums...
Kendrick Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 2:00 PM
Great one. Could be a cobblestone street speaking to a concrete interstate. Way to go. I am sure of course it is a metaphor. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 4:07 PM
Yes a metaphor
Theraven Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 8:56 AM
Hi Andrea, Fine example of nature's building blocks. Really enjoyed this, knowing you don't have to compromise value. Stand and be heard. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 4:07 PM
Thanks, my friend
Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 6:25 AM
Well done Andrea congrats on your win!
Pran Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 1:57 AM
Awesome lines! Brilliant expression
Hind Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 8:15 PM
Awesome! Love it!!! <3
Goldsmith Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 1:31 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun "Cobblestone" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away...........
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