Len Gasun Poet Monoku

Cobbler -Hlm

sits in one corner
with glue, thumb-tacks and hammer
savior of lost soles

Mr. Smith  accepts any kind of old shoes
To fix, sew and make tight ones loose
Also makes loose ones tight
Swapping your left and right
At lowest cost, trims your nails and toes

Old shoe’s life lies over the heels of a cobbler, controller of some avid shoppers.

Jan 22, 2022 11.49am



Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku
Contest Judged:  3/11/2022 3:42:00 AM
Sponsored by: Charles Messina
Place 2

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Charles Messina March 16, 2022 at 7:17 PM Hey Len, sorry it took so long to comment on this fun write. You did well on connecting these forms together. Good ole Mr. Smith! Belated Congrats on your win in my contest. All the best, Charlie Len Gasun March 16, 2022 at 7:29 PM No problem sir. thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest. God bless you sir Charlie. Hugs

Sara Kendrick March 13, 2022 at 4:22 AM I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara Len Gasun March 16, 2022 at 7:30 PM Thank you so much for your congratulatory comments and for dropping my dear friend Sara.

Paula Goldsmith March 11, 2022 at 12:02 PM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Yes, a true cobbler can make old shoes like new. Have a blessed day................. Len Gasun March 16, 2022 at 7:32 PM You're right my dear friend. Cobbler can save my favourite shoes. Thank you very much once again my dear friend. Have a blessed day too. Hugs to you.

I Am Anaya March 11, 2022 at 7:52 AM Len, I love Mr. Smith. Very nice and congratulations! Len Gasun March 14, 2022 at 8:54 PM Thank you so much my dear Anaya. Your kind words arre heartily appreciated. God bless. Hugs.

Karen Croft January 22, 2022 at 1:39 AM very nice! Len Gasun January 22, 2022 at 6:23 PM thank you