Cobbler

Cobbler fresh from the oven
A piping hot peach
Crumbled topping crisp to eat
Sprinkled with sugar
Such a tasty treat
Top with cream
Sweet!





Inspired by Laura McKenzie's "Sweet Treat" contest.

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April 26, 2009 at 1:19 PM

Congratulations on being chosen as one of the winners of the Sweet Treat contest with this tasty poem. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Sharon Winter

April 20, 2009 at 4:43 PM

So sorry I missed this delicious write! Warmest congrats on your win in Laura's contest! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

April 20, 2009 at 4:34 AM

Lena - congratulations on your HM in the "Sweet Treat contest - God Bless, MJ

Brian Strand

April 20, 2009 at 2:43 AM

Congrats on your success in Laura's contest Lolita..Rgds Brian

Kristin Reynolds

April 20, 2009 at 2:05 AM

A yummy write, congrats on your win! Love, Kristin

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

April 19, 2009 at 10:00 PM

Dear Lolita,Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Laura Mckenzie's Sweet Treat Contest As I said before Peach Cobbler my favorite dessert ALWAYS...HG

Raul Moreno

April 19, 2009 at 9:18 PM

Congrats on your HM in the contest Lolita...Raul

Carrie Richards

April 19, 2009 at 6:36 PM

Yummy cobbler....one of my favorites!! This poem is a favorite as well...congratulations on placing in Laura's contest, Lena!! Love, Carrie

Robin Maughan

March 17, 2009 at 7:49 PM

Ok!now I have to get something sweet to eat!! Love this visual.. Love your work. Love filled shamrocks, Robin

Nicholas Westerhausen

March 14, 2009 at 7:03 AM

this was an exciting read! the way this form flows and the way you bring out the very essence of cobbler through words is awesome =D. in love, nick

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 13, 2009 at 11:18 PM

Dear Lolita, My favorite dessert when I lived in Las Vegas Every year on my birthday a sweet co-worker always made me a large pan of Peach Cobbler You have done a Superb Job of making my mouth water Good Luck in the contest My entry is"Blintzes ALWAYS ...HG

Raul Moreno

March 6, 2009 at 12:31 AM

Nice epulaeryu Lolita, best of luck in the contest...Raul

March 4, 2009 at 8:51 AM

Sounds yummy to me. I'll take some! Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Christopher Higgins

March 3, 2009 at 4:59 PM

Sounds heavenly..best wishes in the contest.

Sandra Hudson

March 3, 2009 at 4:46 PM

Miss Lolita, this is a wonderful example of an Epulaeryu type poem. You have triggered my tummy into thinking I know how to cook. Excellent work! Thank you for your warm and generous comments.-Always Alexandra

Carrie Richards

March 3, 2009 at 4:30 PM

Oh boy....does that sound heavenly !!!

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