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Cobalt Concepts

In silence an idea grows
   As thoughts in tints of indigo
 Find azure waves on which to flow
 
   Cobalt concepts rising high
 Ascending slowly to the sky
   Out of reach, there's no reply

  These notions leave lingering clues
 Always clinging to a certain hue
 And will return anew
  Bursting forth out of the blue!
                         -
 1/23/17

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Mark Martin

Date: 2/2/2017 2:28:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph! :-)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 1/31/2017 11:14:00 PM

Good creativity.Short and impressive Joseph.Congrats on your win! :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/31/2017 7:24:00 PM

Great out of the blue cobalt concepts poem Joseph~congratulations!:)

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 1/31/2017 7:48:00 AM

Congrats well-done x

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/30/2017 10:01:00 PM

Beautiful descriptions, Joseph. Congratulations!

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 1/30/2017 7:51:00 PM

a great poem, Joseph, congrats on your placement :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/30/2017 6:28:00 PM

A very well-written concept for the theme of 'blue', Joseph. Congratulations on your fine placement! Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 1/30/2017 5:37:00 PM

beautiful rhyme Jospeh many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton

Date: 1/30/2017 4:28:00 PM

Nice rhymes, and nice flow, congrats Joseph!

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/30/2017 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph!!! Well done!! Big Hugggs!! Deb :)

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 1/30/2017 12:49:00 PM

I like the monorhyme that you use in each verse. Cobalt is a strange concept to deal with, the metal and the color. Thanks so much for being in the contest and congratulations on your placement.

Joseph May
Date: 1/30/2017 3:40:00 PM