Joseph May Poet Rhyme

Cobalt Concepts

In silence an idea grows
   As thoughts in tints of indigo
 Find azure waves on which to flow
 
   Cobalt concepts rising high
 Ascending slowly to the sky
   Out of reach, there's no reply

  These notions leave lingering clues
 Always clinging to a certain hue
 And will return anew
  Bursting forth out of the blue!
                         -
 1/23/17

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Mark Martin February 2, 2017 at 2:28 PM Congratulations Joseph! :-)

Sunita U.D Palawon January 31, 2017 at 11:14 PM Good creativity.Short and impressive Joseph.Congrats on your win! :)

Cheryl Hoffman January 31, 2017 at 7:24 PM Great out of the blue cobalt concepts poem Joseph~congratulations!:)

Wendy Rycroft January 31, 2017 at 7:48 AM Congrats well-done x

Afzal Nusker January 30, 2017 at 10:01 PM Beautiful descriptions, Joseph. Congratulations!

Claudia Polydoro January 30, 2017 at 7:51 PM a great poem, Joseph, congrats on your placement :)

Sandra Haight January 30, 2017 at 6:28 PM A very well-written concept for the theme of 'blue', Joseph. Congratulations on your fine placement! Sandra

Jan Allison January 30, 2017 at 5:37 PM beautiful rhyme Jospeh many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton January 30, 2017 at 4:28 PM Nice rhymes, and nice flow, congrats Joseph!

Deborah Burch January 30, 2017 at 2:08 PM Congratulations Joseph!!! Well done!! Big Hugggs!! Deb :)

Janis Medders Tobechi January 30, 2017 at 12:49 PM I like the monorhyme that you use in each verse. Cobalt is a strange concept to deal with, the metal and the color. Thanks so much for being in the contest and congratulations on your placement. Joseph May January 30, 2017 at 3:40 PM Thank you so much for my placement Janis

Winged Warrior January 23, 2017 at 9:54 PM A blue delight Joseph...great write...god bless...^WW^

Daniel Turner January 23, 2017 at 6:10 PM Excellent write, Joseph. "out of the blue" would make a good contest:)

Connie Marcum Wong January 23, 2017 at 4:13 PM The many moods of blue...lovely Joseph! 7 ; )

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2017 at 3:59 PM GREAT concept in this poetry, Joseph. I really like it. Was it for any contest?