Cobalt Blue Sky

Cloudy cobalt sky Orangy horizon glows The sea mirroring http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature4.php

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Brian Strand

Date: 7/29/2009 12:29:00 AM

A dazzling write James like it.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Karla Null

Date: 7/28/2009 8:25:00 PM

I can actually picture this in my mind! Thanks for the comments, I'm glad you liked "The River".....Karla

Jared Pickett

Date: 7/28/2009 2:59:00 PM

Shady, windy spot-------------Hidden away from the sun--------------That's burning my skin..............Awesome Haiku friend......:JP}

Date: 7/28/2009 1:39:00 PM

Nice use of color and imagery for a beautiful view. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for the kind comment on my poem. Have a good day! Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/28/2009 1:31:00 PM

Must be sunset. Your descriptiveness makes it sound like a perfect picture. Keep writing. Sara