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Cobalt Blue

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Waltzing With Color
Inspired by Kim Merryman
Written July 09, 2015

Syllable count as in the contest rules..

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2015

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Mary Rotman Date: 8/13/2015 8:43:00 PM Nice poem, Sara! Maary Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/23/2015 12:00:00 AM Sara, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 7/20/2015 5:14:00 PM I see a pattern in your writes, Sara. You manage to almost always insert biblical references. Interesting and serves as reminder. Congrats! Kim :-) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/20/2015 3:47:00 PM Congrats for the win. It was a most interesting way you chose that specific color, cobalt blue! (I think it is known as the color of peace) Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/19/2015 3:26:00 PM SARA, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 7/19/2015 5:23:00 AM Many congrats on your win Sara:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Lee Carter Date: 7/19/2015 12:06:00 AM Sara congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 7/18/2015 11:55:00 PM Sara, I recognize some references from the book of Revelations. Creative how you wove them around the color blue. Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/10/2015 11:24:00 PM you have painted a very blue world, SAra. Creative thinking. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 7/11/2015 7:35:00 AM Andea, Well, it is not totally blue..There are always rays of sunshine like the laughter of children at play or me laughing at things that they do.. Sara

Emile Pinet Date: 7/10/2015 3:58:00 PM A very pessimistic view of life that reflects the downward mood of the people in a time of change. Emile. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 7/11/2015 7:33:00 AM Change is not necessarily bad but it can be..Wrong and evil have always existed ..I am speaking about the Book Of Revelations here..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Laura Leiser Date: 7/9/2015 1:21:00 PM I like the creative analogy that you have in this most excellent poem, Sara. It is sad and true, and it makes one weep cobalt tears, as you have described. Excellent, a 7 from me. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 7/11/2015 7:37:00 AM Laura, Right on target with this uplifting review of my work.. Sara