Sara Kendrick Poet Verse

Notes About The Poem

Cobalt Blue

Dark (1)
Colors (2)
Like (1)
Deep, deep (2)
Cobalt Blue (3)

Weeping (2)
Sad (1)
Not like (2)
Gold sunshine (3)

When the fall comes (4)
Merchants weep, (3)
The rich (2)
Weep (1)

Fallen, (2)
All will cry (3)
Cobalt  (2)
Blue (1)

U.S. (2)
Falls  (1) 

Waltzing With Color
Inspired by Kim Merryman
Written July 09, 2015

Syllable count as in the contest rules..

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Mary Rotman August 13, 2015 at 8:43 PM Nice poem, Sara! Maary

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM Sara, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Kp Nunez July 20, 2015 at 5:14 PM I see a pattern in your writes, Sara. You manage to almost always insert biblical references. Interesting and serves as reminder. Congrats! Kim :-)

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2015 at 3:47 PM Congrats for the win. It was a most interesting way you chose that specific color, cobalt blue! (I think it is known as the color of peace)

Skat A July 19, 2015 at 3:26 PM SARA, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT

Jan Allison July 19, 2015 at 5:23 AM Many congrats on your win Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Lee Carter July 19, 2015 at 12:06 AM Sara congrats on your win!

Kim Merryman July 18, 2015 at 11:55 PM Sara, I recognize some references from the book of Revelations. Creative how you wove them around the color blue. Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2015 at 11:24 PM you have painted a very blue world, SAra. Creative thinking. Sara Kendrick July 11, 2015 at 7:35 AM Andea, Well, it is not totally blue..There are always rays of sunshine like the laughter of children at play or me laughing at things that they do.. Sara

Emile Pinet July 10, 2015 at 3:58 PM A very pessimistic view of life that reflects the downward mood of the people in a time of change. Emile. Sara Kendrick July 11, 2015 at 7:33 AM Change is not necessarily bad but it can be..Wrong and evil have always existed ..I am speaking about the Book Of Revelations here..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Laura Leiser July 9, 2015 at 1:21 PM I like the creative analogy that you have in this most excellent poem, Sara. It is sad and true, and it makes one weep cobalt tears, as you have described. Excellent, a 7 from me. Sara Kendrick July 11, 2015 at 7:37 AM Laura, Right on target with this uplifting review of my work.. Sara