Coat On a Bench

Coat on a Bench

An abandoned coat 
draped on a bench, 
covered in leaves 
and dried grass.
Pink fairies and princesses 
infer it’s a girl’s.
How could she forget it?
It’s lonely, lifeless and limp, 
hoping she’ll return 
and clutch it around her 
and take it home.
Sometimes, 
I feel like this coat 
draped on a bench. 
Alone and abandoned 
by a forgetful wench, 
but it’s not for long
 just a fleeting thought,
when I look at the coat 
I know it was loved, 
like me ? when first it was bought.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mcgee Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Nicely penned Dave. I could feel the field emotion rise in the words them melt away in resignation. Congrats.
Deo Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 8:06 PM
Unique analogy in this arresting poem, Dave Cox. Never quit on love for yourself ... after 10 years, I am loved by a Christian woman, & I don't have to justify my faith in Jesus, to the one I love anymore. Glad to see more of your work here. shalom, shalom. Anil Deo
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May 15, 2020 at 1:18 AM
I was waiting for my car's oil change. It's nothing to do with my life, but I saw it on a bench and wrote the poem. Personally, I am very happy. Read 'from Ukraine with love' That's my life. Thank you very much for your comment. Dave
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