Coastal Sunset --- Haiku

coastal sunset -
dropping into the sea also
the juggler's ball



Written February 23rd, 2016
For the What Goes Up, Must Come Down Contest hosted by Catie Lindsey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Breidenthal Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 6:33 AM
The sea holds a lot of interesting things - to the great ball of fire descending, to the small ball that happened to fall one day off the dock I'd imagine. Beautiful, contemplative haiku! Always, Laura
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Aaaaah, this is nothing but a gem.
Hicks Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 2:27 AM
Thank you Iris :)
Callus Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 8:32 AM
The juggler's ball is quite creative, Timothy; expect this to do well in the contest, if haiku is a requisite. ~ paul
Hicks Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Unfortunately it's not, so I just hope Catie likes haiku ... lol! In any case it was fun to write regardless ...
Gentry Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 1:52 AM
I like this! Good luck on the contest!
Hicks Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 11:36 PM
Thanks Susan!
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