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March 31, 2024      17.54pm

Coagulation

Finally my blood began to coagulate When you stopped doing what I hate If not, expect the most unpleasant state Of things from lightest to highest skate. You should never ever be late Whenever you invited me for a date I’m a girlfriend who’s impatient to wait My boredom is always at the zenith of rate. Usual lines played like songs from Kate On ears of her most devoted suitor, Nate But, biggest surprise suddenly came in crate Carried by young men marching from the gate. Men with all kinds of roses started to sate Her doubtful heart making his proposal to escalate A wonderful rite performed by each of his mate To win successfully a wife, cutting their late dates’ fate.
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Nicholsen Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 5:03 AM
Thos is a lovely write enjoyed reading your poem here.
Gasun Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 5:21 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem my dear poet friend and your uplifting words. So much appreciated. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 9:37 AM
Your "Coagulation" is a wonderful write. Love your line, "You should never ever be late Whenever you invited me for a date" So very true. Be on time or early. Wish you would write more. I know you are very busy. Hope you are OK... Have a very blessed day/week writing away..........
Gasun Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Thank you so much my dearest poet friend Paula for your precious time reading my poem, your uplifting comments, understanding and wonderful wishes. Giving back more wishes to you. Finally, I'm on vacation now and I'll try my best to be here more often. Missing you and all here. God bless you and your writings. Hugs
Bowring Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 3:41 PM
Dear sweet Len, this is a wonderful monorhyme with great flow and rhyme. You can sense the agitation and expectation here of the narrator and sympathise. I don’t like tardiness so I’m with them on that one! I love the last stanza especially with the proposal and a wedding. Really enjoyed it . Hope you are well dear friend and got some time to rest. Hugs to you xx
Gasun Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 4:12 PM
Thank you so much for your precious time reading my poem my dear poet friend Christina and your uplifting comments. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
One Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 4:29 AM
Your poem effectively conveys the emotional journey of the speaker, from frustration to joy, while also touching upon themes of romance and commitment. The imagery and language choices contribute to the poem's impact, making it a compelling read.
Gasun Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 3:54 PM
Thank you so much my dear poet friend SO for your precious time reading my poem, your insightful ideas and uplifting words. May God bless you always. Hugs
Bell Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 4:24 AM
A man with a plan. Was he late for the wedding?
Gasun Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 3:52 PM
He he he No. He was scared. ha ha ha. Thank you so much for dropping by reading my poem and your comments. God bless you. Hugs
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