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Clumsy America

America falls Cliff side of Mount Everest Yet fingertips clutch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/25/2009 4:32:00 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. Much said in just three lines--a talent to be sure. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/21/2009 4:20:00 AM
Brilliantly done James. The last line is fire.
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Date: 4/21/2009 1:16:00 AM
Wow, powerful image yet so true metaphor...Raul
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