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Clueless

Clueless? My highly polished shiny shoes Were one of many little clues Like donning all my fancy ties And buying sets of cuff link diamonds - Perhaps the sparkling caught your eye? No? So what about my brand new Gold rimmed glasses? My sudden interest in photography classes? Ironing my wrinkled shirts? Flirting with your friends at work? Plucking my brows? Washing the towels? Working out? How could you NOT know? The clues were there Right under your nose Maybe you just didn’t care – That’s fair But you can’t start caring now It doesn’t count Not after months of letting go – Hell No! That’s not love That’s FEAR Of being alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/22/2013 7:59:00 AM
nice featured poem...PD
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Date: 9/22/2013 6:12:00 AM
very well crafted, the ending packs a punch...congrats on having this gem featured!
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Date: 9/19/2013 8:59:00 AM
I fear you gave too much to one too undeserving. Love this one. Been through it. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 9/17/2013 11:50:00 PM
Nice thought of sharing your used stuffs with those who are in need of it. I hope the poetry talks about you!!!!!
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2011 9:09:00 PM
Congrats Susan on a super fantastic win with this exciting entry luv.. oh so happy PS is running smoothly again ..missed u..
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Date: 10/22/2011 1:36:00 PM
Congrats, Sue. Excellent write. Nice going. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 10/22/2011 8:32:00 AM
Liked this one a lot Susan. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/8/2011 8:25:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading this, Susan-- you sure speak of something so real here! thank you for sharing!
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:49:00 PM
wow, telling it like it is, Susan. I enjoyed this.
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Date: 6/7/2011 3:18:00 PM
A reality scene played so many times in the past Susan, nice one :)
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Date: 6/7/2011 12:49:00 PM
So glad to see you posting poems again, Susan. This one is super intense - and the last line so insightful
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:05:00 AM
bravo Susan this is superb my friend.. an awesome read of progression so intense.. luv the ending realization..not luv ..fear..wow what a revelation ..great piece..
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