Clueless

Clueless?

My highly polished shiny shoes
Were one of many little clues
Like donning all my fancy ties
And buying sets of cuff link diamonds -
Perhaps the sparkling caught your eye?
No?
So what about my brand new 
Gold rimmed glasses?
My sudden interest in photography classes?
Ironing my wrinkled shirts?
Flirting with your friends at work?
Plucking my brows?
Washing the towels? 
Working out?

How could you NOT know?
The clues were there
Right under your nose

Maybe you just didn’t care –
That’s fair
But you can’t start caring now
It doesn’t count
Not after months of letting go –
Hell No!
That’s not love
That’s FEAR 
Of being alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 22, 2013 at 7:59 AM
nice featured poem...PD
Adams Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 6:12 AM
very well crafted, the ending packs a punch...congrats on having this gem featured!
Austin Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 8:59 AM
I fear you gave too much to one too undeserving. Love this one. Been through it. Congrats on the selection. daver
Chakraborty Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 11:50 PM
Nice thought of sharing your used stuffs with those who are in need of it. I hope the poetry talks about you!!!!!
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Susan. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 9:09 PM
Congrats Susan on a super fantastic win with this exciting entry luv.. oh so happy PS is running smoothly again ..missed u..
Taylor Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Congrats, Sue. Excellent write. Nice going. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
Quigley Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Liked this one a lot Susan. Congratulations on your win
K. Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 8:25 AM
Really enjoyed reading this, Susan-- you sure speak of something so real here! thank you for sharing!
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 8:49 PM
wow, telling it like it is, Susan. I enjoyed this.
Fraser Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 3:18 PM
A reality scene played so many times in the past Susan, nice one :)
Horne Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 12:49 PM
So glad to see you posting poems again, Susan. This one is super intense - and the last line so insightful
Sweetheart Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 8:05 AM
bravo Susan this is superb my friend.. an awesome read of progression so intense.. luv the ending realization..not luv ..fear..wow what a revelation ..great piece..
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