Clueless

Clueless Its they're typical life, Judging a child's side, Corrupting our minds, Without knowing our real lives. They keep you an eye, Watching like you're a fly, As you fake your smile, Just to qualify. They will act like, Its they're bodies, and not somebodies. Making sure that you're a copy of an ideal body, How can we be called a community, If we were an exact copy of somebody. I will never understand, Why they cant ever stand, Us being not flawless, They're acting so faultless, While we are all clueless.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/27/2023 9:21:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Kabayan. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Martin Braun

Date: 7/25/2023 3:12:00 PM

Worth reading more than twice, even thrice. Thank you, flower... rising above and standing out, beyond the planted fields by the farmer. There is only one you, never before, and never after. What can we learn by listening to the observations of someone whose views are not like all the followers: that of the leader's back-side.