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Cloudy With a Chance of Stories

the tortoise-shaped cloud as tall as a skyscraper and a half as wide floats slowly across blue sky with no hare-shaped cloud to race patchy cloudy sky with shapely stories to tell hare-brained ideas and the tortoise will always slowly and steadily win

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Date: 3/13/2024 10:11:00 AM
Thank you. That tortoise-shaped cloud was HUGE. I could not allow it to pass by without a poem to remember it.
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Date: 3/13/2024 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for this sweet poem. The tortoise shape is one of my favorites.
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Date: 3/13/2024 5:28:00 AM
what a delightful poem...and the title was perfect, compelling me to read your poem. Loved the comparison of the hare/tortoise race. Well done!
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