Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

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Cloud-Shrouded Moon

Moon was alike a diamond ring,
All thru the previous night.
She now unveils her flawless rear cling,
When uttering the world in sight.

Pale moon emerged from dark cloud,
Like a deep ethereal sight.
It soars at dawn and dark sky, proud,
It yields a harsh glare and faint light.

Moon on my bed jolts me awake,
Deemed the earth ready-shake.
Lush lovers are set by full moon,
It will be visible, soon.

Written: July 16, 2022

3rd Place Contest Win.

Subject: 4. The pale moon emerged from dark clouds

One In Five 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Jennifer Proxenos August 1, 2022 at 8:29 AM Hi Lasaad what a beautiful write my friend congratulations on your win, and hope you have an awesome week ahead of you. Hugs and blessings, JENNIFER.

Joseph May July 30, 2022 at 3:12 AM Romance shines in the moonlight, Congrats on your win Sotto Sotto Poet July 30, 2022 at 6:28 AM Thank you very much for reading placing and commenting on my poem. It means a lot to me, Joseph. Best regards

Beryl Edmonds July 18, 2022 at 6:09 PM The moon shining on the ocean is beautiful to see. Wonderful poetry Sotto … Belle

Darlene De Beaulieu July 17, 2022 at 4:04 PM Hello Lassad, when the moon shines on the body of water is shows its true beauty. It sparkles brightly. Enjoy your evening my friend

Sara Kendrick July 17, 2022 at 10:31 AM I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visits inspire me to do better. Sara

Vijay Pandit July 17, 2022 at 5:51 AM Always a wonderful sight when moon emerges--a sight to adore!

Valsa George July 16, 2022 at 8:46 PM Enjoyed the pale moon's emergence from the clouds ! A lovely poem and a competent entry for the contest ! All the Best, dear friend Lasaad !