Nette Onclaud Poet Sijo

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Clouds Shifting Hues

Watching clouds as a hued mural against sky’s ceiling  enthralls
Embossing the dome with majestic stars, lustrous as fireworks;

Then rain pours … to shapeshift nimbus into a bleak tapestry.



``Written for Jenish Somadas’ Let the Pens Flow-- Sijo Contest
Checked byhomanysyllables.com   5/26/2020

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Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 6:46 PM Your imagery is beautiful as always here, dear nette. congrats and also, thanks for my win in your contest.

Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 7:00 AM Oh that gorgeous hued mural and the dome embossed with stars. Your pen simply paints masterpieces Nette. Congratulations on your win :)

Jenish Somadas June 12, 2020 at 1:04 AM You created wonderful imagery with this well crafted Sijo..Congratulations Nette..

Jennifer Proxenos May 28, 2020 at 12:24 PM Clouds have fascinated me from a little girl, they change shape so elegantly and without any effort that you can not even notice it happening - one moment it is and the next it's not! Good luck in the contest my friend not that you need it. Hugs, Jennifer.

Elaine George May 27, 2020 at 6:07 PM Magnificent Sijo, Dear Nette. Sure to top the winners list. Sincerely Elaine

Regina Mcintosh May 27, 2020 at 7:09 AM I really love this and wish you well in the contest. I'm sure it will place highly. Much blessings and love and prayers to you, Gina

Rico Leffanta May 26, 2020 at 2:41 PM Nicely done! I've been watching clouds for more years than most people have lived, yet still enjoy it more than TV! Aloha! Rico

Anne-Lise Andresen May 26, 2020 at 12:40 PM - Great written, Nette - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper May 26, 2020 at 12:07 PM Amazing, Nette, a painting from you well described. A high score my friend. Hugs Eve

Tom Cunningham May 26, 2020 at 9:32 AM Our ever changing view of the sky in all its glory. Well written Nette. Tom