Clouds Shifting Hues

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Watching clouds as a hued mural against sky’s ceiling  enthralls
Embossing the dome with majestic stars, lustrous as fireworks;

Then rain pours … to shapeshift nimbus into a bleak tapestry.



``Written for Jenish Somadas’ Let the Pens Flow-- Sijo Contest
Checked byhomanysyllables.com   5/26/2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 6:46:00 PM

Your imagery is beautiful as always here, dear nette. congrats and also, thanks for my win in your contest.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/12/2020 7:00:00 AM

Oh that gorgeous hued mural and the dome embossed with stars. Your pen simply paints masterpieces Nette. Congratulations on your win :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/12/2020 1:04:00 AM

You created wonderful imagery with this well crafted Sijo..Congratulations Nette..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/28/2020 12:24:00 PM

Clouds have fascinated me from a little girl, they change shape so elegantly and without any effort that you can not even notice it happening - one moment it is and the next it's not! Good luck in the contest my friend not that you need it. Hugs, Jennifer.