Clouds Shadow

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May the sunshine
Caress the harmony
Of your soul
To harness
The similar traits displayed
Placing bets squarely
Upon the eye-shine
Lost into costly greyness
But loving shadows
Living from the clouds
The depressive but striking
Long desired passion
Of days in the sun
Producing the clouds to cast
A darkness over-
Piercing the eyes
Lashing into oblivion
But loving timeless
Feel of shadow
Love glowing towards me
Leaping, lapping, grinding
Never sad – crushed
Like diamond dust
Sparkles, indestructible
But still sanded down
Towards the shards
Of her tenderness lost
Within my soul
I now harbor
The sunshine days of clouds
Shadows define me

Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/1/2017 2:27:00 AM
Just adore this wonderful write, my friend, from beginning to end you held me captive ... and I so relate, as I have lived in the shadows for many years, taking spiritual sustenance where I can. This is superb ... enjoyed it very much. I hope you are well, and your wife - it's been a while since I heard from you. Blessings, Buddy! :-)
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Date: 11/19/2017 3:27:00 AM
Glorious poetry my friend, Russell. Your studies in poetry have paid of so beautifully. !
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Date: 11/18/2017 9:23:00 PM
I found this to be a melancholy poem, beautifully expressed.
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Date: 11/18/2017 3:54:00 PM
This runs the gambit of emotions. Skillfully expressed and a true pleasure to read.
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Date: 11/18/2017 11:04:00 AM
A bittersweet discourse of emotions--feelings of happy and sad --well depicted Russell!
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Date: 11/18/2017 10:49:00 AM
This is really deep, but to me it sounds like a sad poem and that you are in a sad mood... You expressed this very well in your own unique style..
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Date: 11/18/2017 9:19:00 AM
A deep and brooding pen Russell, fine writing dear poet! Much love xomo
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Date: 11/18/2017 8:47:00 AM
Wow what a great poem Russell with a powerful ending too! Excellent :)
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