Clouds Overhead

at times i wonder
if i'm a meaningless fool stranded
in someone’s tiresome charade



AP: Honorable Mention 2023

confusionintrospectionperspectivesadsolitudefree verse

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Gary Radice

January 25, 2023 at 12:34 AM

Never. You are Line Gauthier; superb poet and very much your own person. That said, when it comes to the wider world we live in I feel many of us are trying to play someone else's games that we don't know the rules to. Cheers - Gary

Line Gauthier

January 25, 2023 at 11:14 AM

You are so sweet, Gary. Thanks for the lovely compliment. I couldn't agree with you more about the games and their rules.

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