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Clouds In Autumn

fluffy clouds drifting shape-shifting cottony mists casting warm shadows Written September 8, 2022 Submitted to: "Autumn in Nature" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/13/2022 6:43:00 AM

terrific imagery Hank

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/13/2022 8:23:00 AM

Thanks, Caren.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2022 7:50:00 PM

Love the contrast between first part and last line, Milt.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/9/2022 9:12:00 PM

I appreciate your comment a lot, Andrea. Haikus are very difficult for me.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/9/2022 7:46:00 AM

"...shape-shifting cottony mists..." is inspired Milt! Very lovely imagery here. Linda

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/9/2022 8:29:00 AM

Thank you so much, Linda.

John Lawless

Date: 9/9/2022 4:57:00 AM

Hey, Milton, I remember laying in the grass with my kids watching the clouds and seeing teddy bears, lions, footballs run through their cloud-filled imaginations. Very nice haiku

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/9/2022 8:29:00 AM

Thank you, John. I still do that occasionally. It is a most relaxing thing to do.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/8/2022 9:26:00 PM

Love the use of Shape-Shifting such a nice way of using this description. In my UFO research you see those two words so many times. David Icke wrote a book named The Reptilian Agenda that eludes to these known Reptilian aliens that are able to shape-shift. Ironically he mentions in his book the royal family. In particular the Queen. It sounds farfetched but in my research others who have been around the Queen have said what he wrote in his book, which was a best seller. I can't comfirm if this

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/9/2022 8:31:00 AM

Wow, Michael. I know nothing about this subject, so you can bet I'm going to delve into some of the things you have talked about. You have very, very intriguing interests, my friend.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/8/2022 9:33:00 PM

is true or not Milton but I know for sure that the Reptilian aliens do exist. They are described as the human haters, they are the most evil ones agains humanity from all the different types, examples, Humanoid, Grey, Insectoid, Nordic, so many others. I have read many of his books and find them to be an interesting read. I know it sounds crazy but many other writers in the UFO realm have said the same thing as David. If you go on youtube and type in Shape-shifting caught on film you will be amazed at all the footage. How human faces change and the pupils are like snakes. There is one on President Bush (senior) that is very popular to watch. Just thought I share...