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Clouds Clash In Our Sky

clouds clash in our sky rains maul maroon umbrella - enough let's divorce ________________________________ Dated July 12, 2019 5-7-5 checked at how many syllables.com Senryu about Greed, Lust or Loss. Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/30/2019 1:38:00 PM

Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/4/2019 11:21:00 AM

Thank you, Funom ... Glad that you like the poem ...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2019 12:15:00 PM

Not real rain but a storm in the love arena. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/20/2019 7:33:00 AM

Thanks for reading the poem ... Visit to your pages is a joy ...

Paul Callus

Date: 7/17/2019 11:39:00 AM

This is really good, Probir. Some storms certainly do take their toll! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/20/2019 7:26:00 AM

Thank you, Paul ...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/17/2019 11:01:00 AM

This is EXCELLENT, Probir! The little word "our" is strong. Janice

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/20/2019 7:27:00 AM

Thank you, Janice ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2019 6:03:00 PM

really outstanding work. Now i see why I did not score so high. The top entries are all so good!! Congrats,Probir

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/20/2019 7:28:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/15/2019 7:15:00 PM

Wow! Missed this powerhouse! Congratulations on top win!

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/16/2019 12:29:00 PM

Thank you, Kim ... Glad you like powerhouse! ...

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/15/2019 6:43:00 PM

Probir, congratulations on your first place win with your catchy and clever senryu!

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/16/2019 12:27:00 PM

Thank you so much, Tania ... I am honoured ... Glad that you have liked the metaphorical senryu ...