Probir Gupta Poet Senryu

Clouds Clash In Our Sky

clouds clash in our sky
rains maul maroon umbrella -
enough let's divorce


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Dated  July 12, 2019
5-7-5 checked at how many syllables.com
Senryu about Greed, Lust or Loss. 
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Funom Makama July 30, 2019 at 1:38 PM Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great.. Probir Gupta August 4, 2019 at 11:21 AM Thank you, Funom ... Glad that you like the poem ...

Sara Kendrick July 19, 2019 at 12:15 PM Not real rain but a storm in the love arena. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Probir Gupta July 20, 2019 at 7:33 AM Thanks for reading the poem ... Visit to your pages is a joy ...

Paul Callus July 17, 2019 at 11:39 AM This is really good, Probir. Some storms certainly do take their toll! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul Probir Gupta July 20, 2019 at 7:26 AM Thank you, Paul ...

Janice Canerdy July 17, 2019 at 11:01 AM This is EXCELLENT, Probir! The little word "our" is strong. Janice Probir Gupta July 20, 2019 at 7:27 AM Thank you, Janice ...

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2019 at 6:03 PM really outstanding work. Now i see why I did not score so high. The top entries are all so good!! Congrats,Probir Probir Gupta July 20, 2019 at 7:28 AM Thank you, Andrea ...

Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2019 at 7:15 PM Wow! Missed this powerhouse! Congratulations on top win! Probir Gupta July 16, 2019 at 12:29 PM Thank you, Kim ... Glad you like powerhouse! ...

Tania Kitchin July 15, 2019 at 6:43 PM Probir, congratulations on your first place win with your catchy and clever senryu! Probir Gupta July 16, 2019 at 12:27 PM Thank you so much, Tania ... I am honoured ... Glad that you have liked the metaphorical senryu ...