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For 1469 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Clouds Aren't Made from Cotton Candy

A recorder is not a flute,
and a guitar is not a lute, 
I said, from the piano stool,
sounding like a fool.

A platypus is not a duck.
It does not quack or cluck.
These are things I know.
'Tis our Lord that makes them so.

A sofa is not a chair.
A toupee is not a head of hair,
but if you're a fly,
alight, when you drop by.

Clouds aren't made of cotton candy,
beaches, oftentimes, are sandy,
and if you're a crab,
stop by.  Take a yellow cab.

So, I whistle as I roam
barefoot, looking for a home
and a love that's kind and true.
Tell me, where are you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 10:27 AM
I enjoyed reading your very creative/fun write. Thanks for the laugh. Oh No, don't tell me "Clouds aren't made of cotton candy." You will ruin my day. Hahaha!!! Have a fun/great day writing away...........
Crandall Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 3:19 PM
Thanks, Paula - sorry to give you the cold, hard truth, - lol.
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 4:12 AM
I like this one, David. Yes, we can't creation's creatures into something they are not, but we can enjoy them as they are. There is love out there that is kind and true, but like all other things in life, sometimes it isn't kind and true. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 3:20 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Crandall Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 3:18 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 5:58 PM
That is such a fun poem, David, it made me smile the whole time I read through it! :)
Crandall Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 8:54 PM
That's very nice to hear, Bj!
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