Clouds

over rose tinged dusk
clouds adorn their soft pink skirts-
          nights opening act


            **2/8/2014**

colorskyhaiku

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Joe Maverick

June 10, 2015 at 3:49 PM

And the night act is good David, well done on the win..'

Skat A

June 9, 2015 at 11:47 AM

David. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**

Robert Lindley

June 9, 2015 at 8:44 AM

CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...a7

Jan Allison

June 9, 2015 at 5:16 AM

So beautifully penned such wonderful imagery David many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mark Trichet

June 8, 2015 at 10:40 PM

Ripper david. Congrats

Shadow Hamilton

June 8, 2015 at 5:41 PM

enchanting Dave fine example of haiku congrats on 3rd place hugs

Andrea Dietrich

May 8, 2014 at 10:20 PM

My favorite one tonight of yours.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 28, 2014 at 12:22 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, David. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

February 28, 2014 at 11:48 AM

David, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Awesome and amazing win :) Luv ~SKAT~

Barbara Gorelick

February 28, 2014 at 9:49 AM

Very nice..love the second line. congrats. BG

David Mohn

March 1, 2014 at 10:55 AM

Thanks Barbara, I appreciate the comment :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 28, 2014 at 8:56 AM

Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, david

Kayod5 Kayode

February 28, 2014 at 8:46 AM

Congrats David on the win . A brilliant one indeed.

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