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Clouds

Just drifting along Clouds visit only briefly To cry somewhere else

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/25/2016 11:08:00 PM
Superb three lines... Congrats on being chosen....
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Date: 11/22/2016 10:04:00 AM
Love it! Congrats, daver
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:51:00 PM
This is cool. i like this. it reminds me of a story i read.called "The sky is crying" anything involving the sky and clouds sounds amazing to me. great write. and thank you for your kind comment.im so glad you like it.<: -Always Lynette
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:29:00 PM
Dear Paula, Superb Haiku (my favorite form) On a hot summer's day the clouds can cry briefly Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM "Dark Pathway" You should read more "End Line Word" POEMS by Dane-Ann Smith Johnsen on Her page 2 under the form Narrative Written Jan.27 She is Co-Creator of the Form Nice to meet YOU ALWAYS ...HG
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:08:00 PM
Awesome imagery Paula, clouds crying. Smile, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:36:00 PM
love how you releated rain tok the clouds crying :) keep it up! ------Ell
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Date: 2/1/2010 2:31:00 PM
Nice thoughts here, so good Daniel
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Date: 2/1/2010 12:44:00 PM
Nice way of putting it...Great Haiku... Always, Farah
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Date: 2/1/2010 12:44:00 PM
Interesting write. David
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