Clouds

Just drifting along
Clouds visit only briefly
To cry somewhere else
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Asuncion Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Superb three lines... Congrats on being chosen....
Austin Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Love it! Congrats, daver
Chachere Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 8:51 PM
This is cool. i like this. it reminds me of a story i read.called "The sky is crying" anything involving the sky and clouds sounds amazing to me. great write. and thank you for your kind comment.im so glad you like it.<: -Always Lynette
Esquire Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 5:29 PM
Dear Paula, Superb Haiku (my favorite form) On a hot summer's day the clouds can cry briefly Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM "Dark Pathway" You should read more "End Line Word" POEMS by Dane-Ann Smith Johnsen on Her page 2 under the form Narrative Written Jan.27 She is Co-Creator of the Form Nice to meet YOU ALWAYS ...HG
Freeman Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Awesome imagery Paula, clouds crying. Smile, Sincerely, Love, Moses
Bourner Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:36 PM
love how you releated rain tok the clouds crying :) keep it up! ------Ell
Cheeseman Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Nice thoughts here, so good Daniel
Chamma Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Nice way of putting it...Great Haiku... Always, Farah
Fringe Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Interesting write. David
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