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Arrogant clouds wearing black greatcoats stomp across a summer sky...

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John Weber

Date: 6/19/2009 9:22:00 AM

Wonderful use of personification, Valerie! You accomplish a great deal with scant few words. We all feel like the weather is insulting just us when we have plans, you know? I always find myself saying, "Typical..." Warm regards, John.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/17/2009 4:36:00 PM

So clever Valerie!! those thugs gloom and doom, on the way!! :) Well done! Love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/17/2009 4:20:00 PM

Powerful image that is quite timely now, especially here in Florida as hurricane season is underway. Nice use of personification for "Arrogant clouds." The reader can almost see them stomping "across a summer sky." Thank you for sharing this, Valerie. Love, Carolyn

Donna Golden

Date: 6/17/2009 4:11:00 PM

What bullies, those clouds! Wonderful piece, Valerie! Donna