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Clouds

Arrogant clouds
wearing black greatcoats
stomp across a summer sky...

seasonspersonification

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John Weber

June 19, 2009 at 9:22 AM

Wonderful use of personification, Valerie! You accomplish a great deal with scant few words. We all feel like the weather is insulting just us when we have plans, you know? I always find myself saying, "Typical..." Warm regards, John.

Carrie Richards

June 17, 2009 at 4:36 PM

So clever Valerie!! those thugs gloom and doom, on the way!! :) Well done! Love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

June 17, 2009 at 4:20 PM

Powerful image that is quite timely now, especially here in Florida as hurricane season is underway. Nice use of personification for "Arrogant clouds." The reader can almost see them stomping "across a summer sky." Thank you for sharing this, Valerie. Love, Carolyn