Clouds

Constantly changing looks,
Cottony clumps spur a
Child’s creativity.
Could that be a giant
Caterpillar that now
Crawls across the sky? A
Camel it’s turned into!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Merryman Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:12 PM
Andrea, I like the creative way you did your pleaides! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Jayasankar Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 3:15 AM
Loved your imagination and portrayal of clouds more Ria. Congratulations on your win...Hugs...~ Ani
Miller Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 1:05 AM
Very well done; congratulations.
May Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea, Very nicely penned
Buhagiar Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:00 AM
Reminds me of a scene in the play Hamlet. Very clever.
Meadows Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:06 PM
It is nice to watch the clouds. A good poem. Well done.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace