Clouds


Cottony vapour fluffs, 
Caravan shape-shifting, 
Can be stratus, nimbus, 
cumulus or cirrus, 
Cover the blue with white, 
Cranky storms turn them black;
Chariot of the Lord. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Scott Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 5:08 AM
"Cranky storms turn them black" is such a lovely line. Well done on a well deserved first :)
James Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Wonderful Jo. Congratulations on your win. Emilia : )
Merryman Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 7:49 AM
This is fantastic, Jo! I especially like the last line! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:48 PM
oh I love how you did yours . It puts mine to shame. Hope it got a first place. Congrats
May Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Very nicely done Jo, Congrats on your win
Canerdy Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 6:31 PM
Skillfully done, Joanna! Janice
Buhagiar Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 2:03 AM
Wonderful Pleiades in honour of God. So well constructed.
Pandit Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 4:38 AM
Beautifully descriptive of clouds, Jo--cottony fluffs, Caravan shape-shifting, Chariot of the Lord--splendid vocabulary!
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