Clouds

Cottony vapour fluffs, Caravan shape-shifting, Can be stratus, nimbus, cumulus or cirrus, Cover the blue with white, Cranky storms turn them black; Chariot of the Lord.

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Sam Scott

Date: 9/14/2023 5:08:00 AM

"Cranky storms turn them black" is such a lovely line. Well done on a well deserved first :)

Emilia James

Date: 9/12/2023 9:29:00 AM

Wonderful Jo. Congratulations on your win. Emilia : )

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/12/2023 7:49:00 AM

This is fantastic, Jo! I especially like the last line! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2023 3:48:00 PM

oh I love how you did yours . It puts mine to shame. Hope it got a first place. Congrats

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2023 6:01:00 AM

Very nicely done Jo, Congrats on your win

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/9/2023 6:31:00 PM

Skillfully done, Joanna! Janice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/9/2023 2:03:00 AM

Wonderful Pleiades in honour of God. So well constructed.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/8/2023 5:16:00 AM

Another awesome testimony to the Creator. Clouds are a wonder, as you do poetically express. Nicely done

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/8/2023 4:38:00 AM

Beautifully descriptive of clouds, Jo--cottony fluffs, Caravan shape-shifting, Chariot of the Lord--splendid vocabulary!