Aniko Puky Poet Rhyme

Cloudland's gate opens

Cloudland’s gate opens

We step up there 
Hand in hand
Arriving to the gate 
On the rainbow‘s staircase
Surrounded by angels
In a melodious atmosphere
Of the Chirp Fanfare of birds
And Orchestra of crickets

Just you and me
on our love journey 
Together on 
the love boat , honey
The destination is 
disembarking
100% Cloud Nine 
Means a beaming smile
A twinkle in your eye 
Endless cuddles hugs 
In the sea of love

Hmmmm, this wild imagery
Totally got me, honey
From the first moment
At first glance
I knew my perfect match
Everything about you
I‘ve loved!

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Darlene De Beaulieu November 21, 2025 at 11:55 AM Hello Aniko Puky, Hi! You know what i think? I think you found your soulmate. You have a deep love for her. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu November 22, 2025 at 11:35 AM Hello Aniko, Oh, Aniko, I am so happy for you. Yes soul attracts soul. Aniko, I have not found my soul mate yet. Sometimes it takes longer to find a soul mate. I sense he is looking for me. Just as I am looking for him. Hugs. /Darlene/ Aniko Puky November 22, 2025 at 1:44 AM Hello Darlene De Beaulieu, you hit the nail, I tell you briefly I have found a man who fell in love with my poetry and me in the same way as I fell in love with his poetry and him. Soul attracted soul compilation. I am so happy you highlight the truth behind my poem. Wishing you a lovely day and to find your soulmate. ANIKO