Clouded View

Foggy morning 
Clouds
Who have left their home
On a suicide mission to kiss the 
ground
Before the sun breaks through
Dissipating and illuminating the 
unclear

Need Eyes from above to guide 
me through the unknown 
Peering through the dense fog 
Ears straining to hear the voice 
of God 
Hovering over the glassy 
stillness of the waters 
Whispering in the silence 
"This is the way....walk in it"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 4:04 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 12:22 AM
awesome poem. Linda
A  Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 2:10 AM
Justin :) Wonderful poem, I enjoyed dropping by. Love SKAT
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