Spring Marsh Poet Dramatic Monologue

Clouded Judgement

Laying down wasting time
Figuring out what's going through my mind
Confused to certain parts
Like reading charts
Detailed entitlement
Breaking down all barriers
Complete one section then off to the next
Seems so complex
But rest
Is what I must not do 
No time to waste
Got to clear some space
To add more 
To the confusion
Of some of these illusions
That I have place in my head
Unable to identify 
But why
Maybe I have locked them all away for a purpose of the unknown
But for the known of the know(er)
Of this distorted abstract confusion that lies within
Breathe
Take a breath then decide
Why did i try to hide these, these....
Uuuggghhh I can't even state it 
Obliterated
That's what they were suppose to be
But something has reminded me of
These, these.....

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Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2014 at 4:12 PM Spring, , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen December 30, 2013 at 4:09 PM - Welcome to P-Soup, Spring ! - Enjoyable to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shawn Munoz December 30, 2013 at 11:22 AM Beautiful Peace. Life is something everyone should learn how to cherish.

Shawn Munoz December 30, 2013 at 11:19 AM Beautiful peace. Life is something everyone should always cherish.

Shawn Munoz December 30, 2013 at 11:16 AM I can actually relate to this, Nicely penned I look forward to more. Happy upcoming New Year.

Skat A December 30, 2013 at 11:15 AM Spring M, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT