Cloudburst In Paradise

The light from your eyes ignites my night.
When two souls mingle, double or single.
The epitome of attachment is felt.

Rain stops not lovers from 
dancing in dark, muddy streets.
Bodies together are sensuous treats.

I swing in your arms to reach the sky,
O such a blissful rain.
No words compare with your name.

We choreograph love's sea of sensation,
together we merge in our thoughts.

No music plays in the background.
Hearts generate the melody of passion.
Bare skin displays our intimate fashion.

When love becomes an endless obsession,
the heart binding dance
enhances currents of romance.

A heavenly kiss breaks the thunder
to paradise we gladly surrender.
                                            
                      
                                      
                                                    Co-written with lovely Smriti Jha
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fiery Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 3:55 AM
This collaboration idea is so great..I love collaborating with you...specially on skype its a fun!
Puddifoot Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 3:51 PM
lovely collaboration here between the two of you, there seems to be a very natural melding of your writing styles, and not just end rhyme but some internal rhyme too, title compliments the poem very nicely :-)
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