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Cloudburst In Paradise

The light from your eyes ignites my night. When two souls mingle, double or single. The epitome of attachment is felt. Rain stops not lovers from dancing in dark, muddy streets. Bodies together are sensuous treats. I swing in your arms to reach the sky, O such a blissful rain. No words compare with your name. We choreograph love's sea of sensation, together we merge in our thoughts. No music plays in the background. Hearts generate the melody of passion. Bare skin displays our intimate fashion. When love becomes an endless obsession, the heart binding dance enhances currents of romance. A heavenly kiss breaks the thunder to paradise we gladly surrender. Co-written with lovely Smriti Jha

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/28/2011 3:55:00 AM
This collaboration idea is so great..I love collaborating with you...specially on skype its a fun!
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Date: 9/27/2011 3:51:00 PM
lovely collaboration here between the two of you, there seems to be a very natural melding of your writing styles, and not just end rhyme but some internal rhyme too, title compliments the poem very nicely :-)
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