Cloudburst

a cloudburst deluge everything comes to a halt then rainbows appear Written June 26, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2022 2:15:00 AM

I love "rainbows appear" - what can be better? I get a rainbow almost every year on my birthday.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/3/2022 8:38:00 AM

Wow, that is so wonderful. Being born the first part of December pretty much precludes that.

Ann Foster

Date: 6/27/2022 8:30:00 AM

Oh yes... love this... love the rain... and way love the rainbow... Blessings on your day. Ann

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/27/2022 9:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Ann. Your kind and thoughtful comments always make my day!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 6/26/2022 8:41:00 PM

We could use a little deluge!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/27/2022 8:08:00 AM

Jeff, we had one here yesterday afternoon and a thunderstorm last night. I was on I64 during the cloudburst and had to pull over...no visibility. It was like a typhoon. I suspect your gardens are really suffering.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/26/2022 5:31:00 PM

The magic of a rainbow.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/26/2022 7:46:00 PM

Indeed. I love them. I saw one this evening while having dinner with friends.