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Cloudburst

a cloudburst deluge 
everything comes to a halt
then rainbows appear 

Written June 26, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

July 3, 2022 at 2:15 AM

I love "rainbows appear" - what can be better? I get a rainbow almost every year on my birthday.

L Milton Hankins

July 3, 2022 at 8:38 AM

Wow, that is so wonderful. Being born the first part of December pretty much precludes that.

Ann Foster

June 27, 2022 at 8:30 AM

Oh yes... love this... love the rain... and way love the rainbow... Blessings on your day. Ann

L Milton Hankins

June 27, 2022 at 9:26 AM

Thank you so much, Ann. Your kind and thoughtful comments always make my day!

Jeff Kyser

June 26, 2022 at 8:41 PM

We could use a little deluge!

L Milton Hankins

June 27, 2022 at 8:08 AM

Jeff, we had one here yesterday afternoon and a thunderstorm last night. I was on I64 during the cloudburst and had to pull over...no visibility. It was like a typhoon. I suspect your gardens are really suffering.