Cloud of Confusion Jan 16 2011

An erie feeling enters the room,
silence fills the air.
A foggy film coats the walls,
setting off a nasty glare.

Look around, What do you see?
a disruption in the plan.
A minor glitch, one would say,
try and fix it if you can.

Shuffling through the many ripples,
that tortures you everyday.
Static thoughts run through your mind,
twisting you into a million ways.

Tragedy will be a sin,
or is it just and illusion.
What you see or what is real,
could be disguised by a cloud of confusion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 19, 2011 at 7:03 PM
i enjoyed the poem on Cloud of Confusion, Priscilla
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