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Cloud Nine

Your Love flows through my body
With static delight
As you hold me in your tender arms
Under moonlight tonight

The passion in our eyes
Sparkling brighter than the stars
As we drift on beautiful love
Past jupitor and mars

Copyright © Elizabeth O'Driscoll | Year Posted 2012

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The Situation Date: 2/26/2013 3:18:00 AM Just a note to keep love growing. Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 12/14/2012 1:41:00 PM Dear Elizabeth, After reading this POETIC Masterpiece, I see YOUR LOVE outshines all YOUR other Attributes. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/15/2012 5:00:00 AM Love you too xox

David Scott Date: 12/13/2012 12:30:00 PM THANKS FOR COMENTS ELIZABETH JUST STOPING BY TO READ YOUR POEM AGAIN XX DAVIDSCOTT YOU HAVE SOUP Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/13/2012 2:34:00 PM Thank you David, love Elizabeth xx

Eileen Manassian Date: 12/9/2012 4:47:00 AM How ethereal! A wonderfully romantic rhyme! :) Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/9/2012 12:46:00 PM Thank you Eileen, love elizabeth

David Scott Date: 11/29/2012 12:08:00 PM VERY NICE POEM CLOUD NINE A WORD I UESD IN MY POEM SUBLIME WICKED I DID ASK HER OUT BUT SHE WAS ALREADY SPOKEN FOR I DID A FOLLOW UP CALLED HSE KNOWS WHICH EXPLAINS WHAT HAPPENED XX DAVIDSCOTT Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/29/2012 3:04:00 PM Thank you David, That's a shame about your girl, you shouldn't have left it too late, love Elizabeth xx

John Posey Date: 11/19/2012 12:15:00 PM Wonderful imagery... Pleasantly seductive and Tastefully presented. Sweet to the core..... Jake Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/20/2012 6:12:00 AM Thank you Jake, Love Elizabeth

Jennifer Spase Date: 11/11/2012 6:57:00 AM love the title, and it hit me in the eye like a pizza pie Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/11/2012 7:44:00 AM thank you jennifer, hope your eye is ok :) have a beautiful day love elizabeth

Richard Palmer Date: 11/10/2012 5:43:00 PM WOW WONDERFULLY WRITTEN,FEEL THE DEPTH,GREAT WRITE ELIZABETH Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/11/2012 5:42:00 AM Thank you Richard, have a wonderful day, love elizabeth

Lynn Dolly Date: 11/8/2012 8:37:00 PM This is sooo cute and romantic! Love it :) made me *smile* ear to ear Login to Reply Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/9/2012 5:15:00 AM Thank you Sharon, love elizabeth