Elizabeth O'Driscoll Poet Rhyme

Cloud Nine

Your Love flows through my body
With static delight
As you hold me in your tender arms
Under moonlight tonight

The passion in our eyes
Sparkling brighter than the stars
As we drift on beautiful love
Past jupitor and mars

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The Situation February 26, 2013 at 3:18 AM Just a note to keep love growing.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire December 14, 2012 at 1:41 PM Dear Elizabeth, After reading this POETIC Masterpiece, I see YOUR LOVE outshines all YOUR other Attributes. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry Elizabeth O'Driscoll December 15, 2012 at 5:00 AM Love you too xox

David Scott December 13, 2012 at 12:30 PM THANKS FOR COMENTS ELIZABETH JUST STOPING BY TO READ YOUR POEM AGAIN XX DAVIDSCOTT YOU HAVE SOUP Elizabeth O'Driscoll December 13, 2012 at 2:34 PM Thank you David, love Elizabeth xx

Eileen Manassian December 9, 2012 at 4:47 AM How ethereal! A wonderfully romantic rhyme! :) Elizabeth O'Driscoll December 9, 2012 at 12:46 PM Thank you Eileen, love elizabeth

David Scott November 29, 2012 at 12:08 PM VERY NICE POEM CLOUD NINE A WORD I UESD IN MY POEM SUBLIME WICKED I DID ASK HER OUT BUT SHE WAS ALREADY SPOKEN FOR I DID A FOLLOW UP CALLED HSE KNOWS WHICH EXPLAINS WHAT HAPPENED XX DAVIDSCOTT Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 29, 2012 at 3:04 PM Thank you David, That's a shame about your girl, you shouldn't have left it too late, love Elizabeth xx

John Posey November 19, 2012 at 12:15 PM Wonderful imagery... Pleasantly seductive and Tastefully presented. Sweet to the core..... Jake Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 20, 2012 at 6:12 AM Thank you Jake, Love Elizabeth

Jennifer Spase November 11, 2012 at 6:57 AM love the title, and it hit me in the eye like a pizza pie Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 11, 2012 at 7:44 AM thank you jennifer, hope your eye is ok :) have a beautiful day love elizabeth

Richard Palmer November 10, 2012 at 5:43 PM WOW WONDERFULLY WRITTEN,FEEL THE DEPTH,GREAT WRITE ELIZABETH Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 11, 2012 at 5:42 AM Thank you Richard, have a wonderful day, love elizabeth

Lynn Dolly November 8, 2012 at 8:37 PM This is sooo cute and romantic! Love it :) made me *smile* ear to ear Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 9, 2012 at 5:15 AM Thank you Sharon, love elizabeth