Alexis Y. Poet Rhyme

Cloud Nine

Our love began as a small little seed
Now it is in full bloom today, my love
I am on cloud nine, the stars did align
My darling man, you are such a rare breed
Your steadfast love melted my icy heart
You fulfilled a deep longing and pure need
Basking in your sweet nectar is pure bliss
Sweetheart I tend follow, you are the lead
You are a precious gift from up above
The stars did align, I am on cloud nine
I am so happy cause’ I embraced love’s creed










*Abracadabra Rhyme

Created by William Kekaula. The syllable count is your choice but must be the same for all eleven lines. abRacadabRa is the rhyme scheme, and the lines with the R's are reversed lines. All lines must be rhyming with the exception of lines 'c', and, 'd'. 

* This form was a challenge, but I decided to give it a go.

Alexis Y.
05/31/2021

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Virginia Gelok June 2, 2021 at 5:54 PM cloud 9 is a dream place for us all. I did enjoy your poem,

Vijay Pandit June 1, 2021 at 5:10 AM Enjoyed the tenor and message of this poem, Alexis.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 1, 2021 at 4:54 AM A seed that is sowed by love is bound to bloom in the heart, my dearest friend, Alexis. Your loving poem unmistakably shows us the way to the ninth cloud where you are waiting for your readers to come. Outstanding writing! Hugs xxx

Victor Buhagiar June 1, 2021 at 1:29 AM You should be on cloud nine. Very romantic poem.

Judy Ball May 31, 2021 at 9:20 PM Ah love is a many splendored thing. Well done my friend. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 31, 2021 at 4:28 PM Cloud Nine is a fitting title, because that is where this beautifully expressed, romantic poem takes one to. Have a lovely evening, Evelyn :D

Darlene De Beaulieu May 31, 2021 at 3:45 PM Hello alexis Y., well i think you have done a gret job on this poem . Hugs Darlene

Sotto Poet May 31, 2021 at 2:52 PM Fine poem Alexis, I can’t talk about the form as I tried it before, but still can’t make, I see here you did it very well. I wish you a very good luck in the contest Alexis Y. May 31, 2021 at 3:02 PM Hi Lasaad, Thank you so much. Isn't for any contest. The contest is over; I just wanted to give it a go. This is my second attempt at the form. I appreciate your continued support. Have a great day:-)Alexis